Monday, July 21, 2008

if the earth
would stop moving
I could stay
in this shaded spot-
restless thoughts

2 comments:

Area 17 said...

I love those first four lines, extremely clear, and memorable.

Although I like the last line it seems to contradict the fact that you would like to stay in a shaded spot being quiet. Maybe that's the point, it's that almost constant contradiction humans have in their lives. ;-)

Beatrice V said...

Fantastic, I am not sure I commented on your own page about this already. But if so, even this second reading has the same impact as the first.