Monday, July 21, 2008

if the earth
would stop moving
I could stay
in this shaded spot-
restless thoughts
Posted by at

2 comments:

Area 17 said...

I love those first four lines, extremely clear, and memorable.

Although I like the last line it seems to contradict the fact that you would like to stay in a shaded spot being quiet. Maybe that's the point, it's that almost constant contradiction humans have in their lives. ;-)

July 22, 2008 at 6:40 AM
Beatrice V said...

Fantastic, I am not sure I commented on your own page about this already. But if so, even this second reading has the same impact as the first.

August 1, 2008 at 3:41 AM

Post a Comment

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)