Thursday, July 10, 2008

staccato of rain
pounds the tin roof
the silence between
two estranged lovers
is deafening

Vic Gendrano

4 comments:

Reihaisha said...

this is a great word picture

Beatrice V said...

Eloquent.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like this!

Vic Gendrano said...

Thank you all very much! This was in my TO REVISE file for a while - it needed a long incubation.