Sunday, May 25, 2008

In the dead of night
I suddenly awaken
Empty room, no sounds,
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Area 17 said...

Oh how I hate the waking up at the dead of night.

I liked the interesting way you used the commas, giving a sense of something to follow, but leaving it in the 'negative space' part of the haiku.


all my best,

Alan

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May 25, 2008 at 9:30 AM

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