Saturday, May 24, 2008

spring Sunday -
brand new bicycles
along the towpath


***

dimanche printanier -
des vélos flambant neuf
sur le chemin du canal

1 comment:

Area 17 said...

Another good taut haiku!

Superbly understated, and allowing me to wander around the haiku on my own without anyone telling me what to do. Wonderful! ;-)


all my best,

Alan

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