Wednesday, May 28, 2008

MORNING

Water falling
from the overhead tank--
sound wakes me up


--R.K.SINGH
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1 comment:

Gwil W said...

hi R K,
is 'falling' a bit strong or even a bit vague i find myself wondering .....can you be more explicit perhaps?
best,
gwilym

May 31, 2008 at 3:13 PM

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