Thursday, May 29, 2008

summer holidays...

smokers
alight nervously
from buses

the seaside
landlady
vacancy in her eyes

blue seas
and sunshine
in the postcard racks

salvation
and gulls
blow over the pier

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

just love these
john

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Unknown said...

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
What a clever writing style you have. I really like the way you described your not-so-loved items, and the slideshow was brillo. I saw Mud's slideshow yesterday with the spotty tights, and loved that, too.

Gwil W said...

thanks rohit ...but
what's the slideshow are you refering to?

Jim Tantillo said...

seaside landlady is particularly good.