Driftwood along the banks of the Mississippi River, New Orleans
John! The quintessential haiku. Thank you for the lovely vision.
I really like this. The third line is tempting to go in the first line, but I know because of its length it would look top heavy.Maybe a two liner? ;-)one patch of sunlightthe cat stretches on the quiltJust 3 days to the deadline! The With Words International Online Haiku CompetitionHalf the profits go to a literacy project in Africa: Malawi literacy project.
enigmatic luxuriating feline - but don't be fooled -he's thinking about the nightnice one John
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John! The quintessential haiku. Thank you for the lovely vision.
I really like this. The third line is tempting to go in the first line, but I know because of its length it would look top heavy.
Maybe a two liner? ;-)
one patch of sunlight
the cat stretches on the quilt
Just 3 days to the deadline!
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition
Half the profits go to a literacy project in Africa: Malawi literacy project
.
enigmatic luxuriating feline - but don't be fooled -
he's thinking about the night
nice one John
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