Tuesday, May 27, 2008

cat stretched
on the quilt -
one patch of sunlight

3 comments:

nora said...

John! The quintessential haiku. Thank you for the lovely vision.

Area 17 said...

I really like this. The third line is tempting to go in the first line, but I know because of its length it would look top heavy.

Maybe a two liner? ;-)

one patch of sunlight
the cat stretches on the quilt




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Gwil W said...

enigmatic luxuriating feline - but don't be fooled -
he's thinking about the night

nice one John