Wednesday, May 14, 2008

a May morning stroll,
interrupted by blue blossoms
-in her lover's eyes
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1 comment:

Area 17 said...

I really like this, very romantic!

I feel you don't need the dash at the beginning of the third line.

all my best,

Alan
Just a couple of weeks (and a bit) to the deadline!
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition
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May 15, 2008 at 5:31 AM

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