Saturday, May 24, 2008

Thunder

distant thunder...
closing a door
I didn't open

3 comments:

John McDonald said...

terrific one
john

Area 17 said...

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I have to agree with John here! ;-)

Another wonderfully understated well-crafted haiku allowing the reader to enter and wander around it, picking up pleasures and layers as they go without being 'told'.

More please!


all my best,

Alan

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Gwil W said...

sinisterly good ...