Wednesday, June 18, 2008

freight train
rumbles past -
spores leave on the draught

1 comment:

Area 17 said...

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Nice n'moody.

I don't even think you need that middle line.


freight train -
spores leave on the draught

freight train-
spores leave
on the draught



all my very best,

Alan
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Alan

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