Tuesday, June 3, 2008

Vacation Plans

vacation plans--
on the brochure cover
a garden like mine

2 comments:

Area 17 said...

Hi Megan,

I really like this! ;-)

Have you considered removing "making":



vacation plans--
on the brochure cover
a garden like mine




I think it makes it even stronger, and brings out the "haiku humour."

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Area 17 said...

;-)