Tuesday, June 3, 2008

firetruck sirens-
losing my thoughts of her
temporarily

2 comments:

John McDonald said...

nice one andrew
john

Area 17 said...

I like the start to this haiku! Although I'd prefer if "fire truck" was two separate words to make it easier on the eye.

My first reading had you losing your thoughts of her mortality, something I could relate to very recently.

fire truck sirens-
losing my thoughts
of her mortality


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