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eighteen summers
the glue remains
of a paper heart
A slight update was needed for this haiku. I can just about see some glue left from a couple of paper hearts stuck onto lamp posts from someone who had actually posted over half a dozen hearts (and a few chalk messages on pavements) on my route from work to home. It was very romantic, and her ploy worked, as we went out for a few years. ;-)
The original version:
fourteen summers
the glue remains
of a paper heart
The Haiku Calendar 2004
Snapshots Press ISBN 1-903543-07-X
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2 comments:
nice one
john
Hi Alan,
I sense there's a nice romantic story behind your haiku. You can even turn it into a haibun, if you wish.
I have wrote many times about first love, love lost, you name it and I guess I would never tire writing one. I might just share some with you one of these days.
Write on!
Vic Gendrano
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