Driftwood along the banks of the Mississippi River, New Orleans
nice one andrewjohn
I like the start to this haiku! Although I'd prefer if "fire truck" was two separate words to make it easier on the eye.My first reading had you losing your thoughts of her mortality, something I could relate to very recently.fire truck sirens-losing my thoughts of her mortality.
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nice one andrew
john
I like the start to this haiku! Although I'd prefer if "fire truck" was two separate words to make it easier on the eye.
My first reading had you losing your thoughts of her mortality, something I could relate to very recently.
fire truck sirens-
losing my thoughts
of her mortality
.
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