Wednesday, August 27, 2008

autumn blowing in -
leaves
stiffening

3 comments:

Nora said...

I like it, John. The Tao talks of stiffness being associated with aging; the seasonal equivalent is autumn. In your haiku, I can feel the weather and leaves changing.

Congratulations on the publication of your book. I love your haikus and especially enjoy reading the Scots next to the English.

John McDonald said...

thanks Nora
john

kouji said...

lovely. and sad.