Wednesday, August 13, 2008

watching birds
dive down to the river
and back up-
good news and bad news
on the same day


Nora said...

A wise, poetic insight, Andrew. Good and bad news are indeed two sides of the same life experience. Well done!

scatterhaiku said...

indeed. brilliant, insightful words. :) one image, two players, diametrically opposed points of view.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

thank you for the kind words

Alan Summers said...

It's always a pleasure to read excellent tanka, thank you. ;-)