Summer Haiku 2008: Genesis

Saturday, August 23, 2008

For such as this ray
Of moonlight dusting your face
Were galaxies made

kouji said...: lovely. :) nice segue from the individual to the cosmic. :); August 23, 2008 at 9:44 AM
Jade said...: ooOooo romantic -; August 23, 2008 at 10:01 PM
John McDonald said...: terrific one
john; August 24, 2008 at 2:35 AM
Lahari Chatterji said...: An ideal short poem with a feeling of a story with an amazing yet relevant ending.; August 24, 2008 at 5:06 AM
Beatrice V said...: Gorgeous moon glow of words.; August 24, 2008 at 11:00 AM
nora said...: Thank you all for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to comment!; August 24, 2008 at 7:44 PM