Monday, August 18, 2008

her parting words
don't see me anymore
ending summer

4 comments:

scatterhaiku said...

lovely, rather painful lines. nice dual meaning / ambiguity. :)

Vic Gendrano said...

Thank you very much for your insightful comments. Her admonition plus the warmth of summer suddenly ending are indeed painful to him and foreboding...

John McDonald said...

nice one vic
john

Vic Gendrano said...

Thanks John,

I really appreciate it.