Summer Haiku 2008

Saturday, August 16, 2008

mistral evening -
wine drops
on the tablecloth

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soir de mistral -
des gouttes de vin
sur la nappe

David said...: great first line especially 'mistral' I like the way it contrats with 'tablecloth'.

perhaps the strong consonants of 'mis' 'tr' with 'ta' 'bl 'cl'

conjuringsunlight.blogspot.com; August 16, 2008 at 12:20 PM
Beatrice V said...: I love this, the wine(tear)drops red? blood? spilled on the tablecloth.; August 16, 2008 at 4:20 PM
scatterhaiku said...: i love the image of the wine drops on the tablecloth. :) find it quite evocative...; August 17, 2008 at 6:48 AM
John McDonald said...: good one
john; August 19, 2008 at 5:12 AM