Saturday, August 16, 2008

mistral evening -
wine drops
on the tablecloth


soir de mistral -
des gouttes de vin
sur la nappe


David said...

great first line especially 'mistral' I like the way it contrats with 'tablecloth'.

perhaps the strong consonants of 'mis' 'tr' with 'ta' 'bl 'cl'

Wordcrafter said...

I love this, the wine(tear)drops red? blood? spilled on the tablecloth.

scatterhaiku said...

i love the image of the wine drops on the tablecloth. :) find it quite evocative...

John McDonald said...

good one