Saturday, August 16, 2008

dark clouds roll in
dress flies up
cool wind

nocturnal symphony
honking sounds

jewels sparkling at
end of palm leaves
raindrops hanging on


Lahari Chatterji said...

I like the way you have held up several aspects of a rainy day with so few words.

scatterhaiku said...

'nocturnal symphony,' lovely line. :) and so apt.

'raindrops hanging on,' that's just a lovely, lovely image there. jewels indeed. :)

John McDonald said...

enjoyed these isabel

WorkingWords100 said...

Thanks for your comments. These are observations after several rainstorms.