Saturday, August 16, 2008

dark clouds roll in
dress flies up
cool wind

nocturnal symphony
honking sounds
frogs

jewels sparkling at
end of palm leaves
raindrops hanging on
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4 comments:

Lahari Chatterji said...

I like the way you have held up several aspects of a rainy day with so few words.

August 17, 2008 at 4:50 AM
scatterhaiku said...

'nocturnal symphony,' lovely line. :) and so apt.

'raindrops hanging on,' that's just a lovely, lovely image there. jewels indeed. :)

August 17, 2008 at 6:42 AM
John McDonald said...

enjoyed these isabel
john

August 19, 2008 at 5:11 AM
Isabel said...

Thanks for your comments. These are observations after several rainstorms.

August 19, 2008 at 12:17 PM

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